the analysis of commentary text based experiential and interpersonal process

Group 7

Dameria Pintubatu                                   (15120178)

Juniarta Tampubolon                               (15120182)

Cindy Camelia Juliana Sinaga                  (15120194)

Natan                                                       (15120198)

CHEATING WITH MOBILE PHONES

As police expand their investigation into cheating in the state run college entrance exam by using mobile phones, people deplore the low morality among the growing generation and many also condemn the absurdity of the current education system that drove student to do such a thing. Strong blame should also be laid on local authorities who failed to prevent such a misdeed, long anticipated in the overdeveloping information technology environment of this country.

About 100 students in Kwangju have been "confirmed" as having been involved in the cheating, some transmitting the answer, some receiving them, others coordinating the illicit communications outside testing places.

It is unfortunate that dishonest means were used by students who wanted to get a higher score in the state test and enter a college that is beyond their academic ability.

But what dismay us are that such scandals as this and other scandals will continue to take place around us until and unless the nation is freed from its obsession with college diplomas.

THE ANALYSIS OF EXPERIENTIAL AND INTERPERSONAL PROCESS IN COMMENTARY TEXT

Clause 1

As police expand their investigation into cheating in the state run college entrance exam by using mobile phones.

As police	Expand		Their investigation into cheating	In the state run college entrance exam by using mobile phones
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal	Cir. Loc. Spatial
Subject	Do	Expand	Complement	Adjunct
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 2

People deplore the low morality among the growing generation.

People	Deplore		The low morality	Among the growing generation
Sensor	Pro. Mental		Phenomenon	Cir. Contingency
Subject	Do	Deplore	Complement	Adjunct
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 3

And many also condemn the absurdity of the current education system.

Many (people) also	Condemn		The absurdity of the current education system
Sayer	Pro. Verbal		Verbiage
Subject	Do	Condemn	Complement
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 4

That (education system) drove student to do such a thing.

That (education system)	Drove		Student	To do such a thing
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal	Cir. Matter
Subject	Did	Drive	Complement	Adjunct
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 5

Strong blame should also be laid on local authorities.

Strong blame	Should also be laid		On local authorities
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal
Subject	Should	Be laid	Complement
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 6

Who (local authorities) failed to prevent such a misdeed, long anticipated in the overdeveloping information technology environment of this country.

Who (local authorities)	Failed		To prevent such a misdeed, long anticipated	. In the overdeveloping information technology environment of this country
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal	Cir. Loc. Spatial
Subject	Did	Fail	Complement	Adjunct
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 7

About 100 students in Kwangju have been "confirmed" as having been involved in the cheating

About 100 students	In Kwangju	Have been "confirmed"		. As having been involved in the cheating
Token	Cir. Loc. Spatial	Pro. Relational. Identifying		Cir. Role
Subject	Adjunct	Have	Been confirmed	Adjunct
		Finite	Predicator
	Re-		Sidue
Mood

Clause 8

Some transmitting the answer.

Some (they)	Transmitting		The answer
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal
Subject	(are)	Transmitting	Complement
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 9

Some receiving them.

Some (they)	Receiving		Them (the answer)
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal
Subject	(are)	Receiving	Complement
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue

Clause 10

Others coordinating the illicit communications outside testing places.

Others ( they)	Coordinating		The illicit communication	Outside testing places.
Actor	Pro. Material		Goal	Cir. Loc. Spatial
Subject	(are)	Coordinating	Complement	Adjunct
	Finite	Predicator
Mood		Residue